My name is Philip Sobash. I attend Clemson University and my major there is Biological Sciences. After I graduate Clemson I hope to go on to medical school. I want to become on Oncologist. In my spare time when I am not doing work I like to do absolutely nothing. I could just sit around all day and watch tv, eat, and go to sleep and be perfectly happy. My hobbies include politics and sports. I played football and golf in high school. I was also a class representative in student government in high school. My hometown is Irmo, SC. I have lived in Ohio, Tennessee, and Georgia also. I attended Ben Lippen High School in Columbia, South Carolina. My goal in life is to become a doctor so I can help people who are less fortunate and need help.
Like your picture, your writing style is informal. The picture selection is appropriate because it not only shows you doing what you like to do best, eating, but it is in an informal setting, a dinner table. It is a good bio, introducing yourself, telling a little about your past and your futures. I thought it was cool that you lived in Ohio because so did I. The only thing I would do different would be to put your goal in life in the section with your futures instead of at the end.
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