At a Glance

After reading over my paper I found some key critical mistakes.  Grammatical Errors and formatting errors were scattered throughout the paper.  I made my own feedback sheet on my paper giving myself critiquing points of things I could do better on my next draft.  I compared these to the peer reviews that were given to me.  I tried to look for different things that my group may have missed.  Reading it aloud helped when a sentence didn't make sense because hearing it out loud opened up my other senses to mistakes.  Overall my own review was very productive and it is going to help me write my next draft.  After getting back my rough draft that was taken up in class I realized more formatting errors in the paper.  I need to make sure my paper runs a little better and has a more organized flow.  Transition statements will be key in making sure that the flow of the paragraphs is good and will strengthen my argument.